| Downtown Spaces | 35 |
“I pulled your site up on my phone and it came up tiny — can I show you?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +65 points on their score. What it lacks- Title tag wrong length or missing. The blue headline in Google. Too long and it is cut mid-word.
- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No mobile viewport. Phones render the desktop layout shrunk to illegibility.
- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- No structured data. No machine-readable address, hours or amenities.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
Design fix- One line per page: what it is, which city, then the name.
- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- Responsive layout and thumb-sized tap targets.
- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Invisible on the page; it sits in the source.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
SEO fix- The strongest single on-page ranking element.
- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- Google indexes the mobile version first.
- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- This is what earns a map card instead of a plain blue link.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
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| The Workplace | 35 |
“I pulled your site up on my phone and it came up tiny — can I show you?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +65 points on their score. What it lacks- Title tag wrong length or missing. The blue headline in Google. Too long and it is cut mid-word.
- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No mobile viewport. Phones render the desktop layout shrunk to illegibility.
- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- No structured data. No machine-readable address, hours or amenities.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
Design fix- One line per page: what it is, which city, then the name.
- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- Responsive layout and thumb-sized tap targets.
- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Invisible on the page; it sits in the source.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
SEO fix- The strongest single on-page ranking element.
- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- Google indexes the mobile version first.
- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- This is what earns a map card instead of a plain blue link.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
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| Regus | 50 |
“You're at 50 out of 100 — better than most. Want the last few points?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +50 points on their score. What it lacks- Title tag wrong length or missing. The blue headline in Google. Too long and it is cut mid-word.
- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- No structured data. No machine-readable address, hours or amenities.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
Design fix- One line per page: what it is, which city, then the name.
- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Invisible on the page; it sits in the source.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
SEO fix- The strongest single on-page ranking element.
- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- This is what earns a map card instead of a plain blue link.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
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| One:One | 52 |
“When somebody asks their phone where to work in El Paso, there's nothing on your site for it to read. Almost nobody in Texas has this yet.” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +48 points on their score. What it lacks- Title tag wrong length or missing. The blue headline in Google. Too long and it is cut mid-word.
- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
- No llms.txt or AGENTS.md. Nothing structured for an assistant to read when somebody asks it where to work in this city.
Design fix- One line per page: what it is, which city, then the name.
- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
- Two plain text files at the root. No design impact.
SEO fix- The strongest single on-page ranking element.
- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
- Almost nobody has them, which makes it the cheapest edge going.
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| UrbanWork | 52 |
“When somebody asks their phone where to work in El Paso, there's nothing on your site for it to read. Almost nobody in Texas has this yet.” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +48 points on their score. What it lacks- Title tag wrong length or missing. The blue headline in Google. Too long and it is cut mid-word.
- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
- No llms.txt or AGENTS.md. Nothing structured for an assistant to read when somebody asks it where to work in this city.
Design fix- One line per page: what it is, which city, then the name.
- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
- Two plain text files at the root. No design impact.
SEO fix- The strongest single on-page ranking element.
- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
- Almost nobody has them, which makes it the cheapest edge going.
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| Quixote Enterprises | 62 |
“When somebody asks their phone where to work in El Paso, there's nothing on your site for it to read. Almost nobody in Texas has this yet.” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +38 points on their score. What it lacks- Meta description wrong length or missing. The grey sentence under the title. It decides the click.
- No structured data. No machine-readable address, hours or amenities.
- Under 300 words. Too little text to match against any search.
- No llms.txt or AGENTS.md. Nothing structured for an assistant to read when somebody asks it where to work in this city.
Design fix- One sentence: what you offer, who for, which city.
- Invisible on the page; it sits in the source.
- Real copy about the space, and photographs of it.
- Two plain text files at the root. No design impact.
SEO fix- 70-165 characters, or Google writes its own from your menu.
- This is what earns a map card instead of a plain blue link.
- Long-tail phrases only exist if the words are on the page.
- Almost nobody has them, which makes it the cheapest edge going.
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| Working Capitol | 84 |
“When somebody asks their phone where to work in El Paso, there's nothing on your site for it to read. Almost nobody in Texas has this yet.” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +16 points on their score. What it lacks- No single clear H1. Nothing on the page states plainly what this place is.
- No llms.txt or AGENTS.md. Nothing structured for an assistant to read when somebody asks it where to work in this city.
Design fix- One H1 per page, in the customer's words.
- Two plain text files at the root. No design impact.
SEO fix- Multiple H1s split the signal and none wins.
- Almost nobody has them, which makes it the cheapest edge going.
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| Cowork Oasis 2601 N Stanton St, El Paso | 0 |
“I couldn't find a website for Cowork Oasis anywhere — is that right?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +100 points on their score. What it lacks- No website on file. Nothing for anybody to find when they search.
Design fix- One page done properly: what it is, the city, photos, a phone number that dials on a tap.
SEO fix- A new site starts clean - correct title and description, structured data, and the AI files nobody else has.
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| Creators Collaborative | n/a |
“I couldn't get a read on your site from our server — it's behind a firewall. Can I look at it with you on your screen?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +100 points on their score. What it lacks- Could not be measured from here. Their site sits behind a firewall that turns away our server — a real browser gets the same 403. That means the site is up; we simply cannot score it remotely. Do not tell them it is broken.
Design fix- Score it on the spot, on their screen or yours over a phone hotspot. Everything else in this sheet still applies once you can see it.
SEO fix- Worth asking whether the same firewall is turning away Google. If it is, that is the whole conversation and it is urgent.
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| The Station Urban Offices | n/a |
“I couldn't get a read on your site from our server — it's behind a firewall. Can I look at it with you on your screen?” Offer one — listing price not set Featured placement on their city page and the directory, photos, and a working link. They are already listed free — this is position. Do not quote a number yet. The public page says only “free to be listed, upgrade for the spotlight” and no figure has been agreed. Take the interest, say you will confirm the rate, and check with Paul. Offer two — the fix $349 Title, description, structured data, mobile, and the llms.txt / AGENTS.md files. Paid on delivery. Worth +100 points on their score. What it lacks- Could not be measured from here. Their site sits behind a firewall that turns away our server — a real browser gets the same 403. That means the site is up; we simply cannot score it remotely. Do not tell them it is broken.
Design fix- Score it on the spot, on their screen or yours over a phone hotspot. Everything else in this sheet still applies once you can see it.
SEO fix- Worth asking whether the same firewall is turning away Google. If it is, that is the whole conversation and it is urgent.
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